The feedback I receive during the group crit suggests that this image does not communicate the article effectively. I was worried about this and upon reflection feel that I am trying to be too clever. Perhaps it is a case of sometimes the most obvious answer is the best.To this end, I need a total rethink. The article is about improving one's brain power via various methods and so that needs to remain my focus for this illustration.
I will definitely finish this piece off anyway simply because I really like it as a standalone image.
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